| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 01/22/09 at 09:04 PM Man, I hear this, it's like...all the cosmos could not compare....wonderfully efficient. Delighted. Thanks. |
| Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 01/22/09 at 09:55 PM :):) Ah to view such a smile and better yet to be behind the cause of one. smh |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 01/22/09 at 10:09 PM This poem really shines Jadi....CharMin |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/22/09 at 10:44 PM Beautiful image. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 01/22/09 at 11:30 PM I want to be a part of
"all
Who waltz upon the nebulae
Daring to go blind."
Your dear friend is blessed.
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| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 01/23/09 at 01:41 AM Tribute in hyperbole honors so very well the dear friend. |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 01/23/09 at 01:50 PM Delightful JD, just delightful. Very nicely done. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/23/09 at 04:04 PM I like the addition of the first stanza, as I came back to read again and comment. It adds some fine movement to this and opens up the scene to "the beam". Lovely. |
| Posted by Maria Massarella on 01/23/09 at 11:55 PM
* si
~ beyond ... dreams ...
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| Posted by Wendy Sparling on 01/25/09 at 02:25 AM Dimpled cheeks and gradient lips~~~who could not smile back at these radiant words? |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 02/27/09 at 04:33 PM Your words challenge the heights and depths of poetry (and even this wouldbe poet) to travel dances, beyond and behind, smiling eyes and cloudy skies reaping glory, glory, glory...
dazzled blind.
You make me sigh with satisfaction |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/03/09 at 05:58 PM I hope your friend read this and appreciated it! Lovely piece. Great job. |
| Posted by Kate Demeree on 04/18/09 at 01:43 AM For some reason... this reminds me of how I felt the first time I looked into my child's eyes! It was a fantasticly humbling moment... yet glorious. Thank You... |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 07/31/10 at 03:43 AM Wow, this poem all but frees me from the pull of gravity with its bliss and sheer delving delight into the galaxy of joy behind a smile. Thanks, pal, this is a sparkler. |
| Posted by Bertram Sparagmos on 09/29/12 at 04:29 PM The comparison is so simplistic, yet so profound. |
