| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 01/14/09 at 01:50 PM George, the more I familiarize myself with this expanding and evolving universe, the more it appears to me, a stranger, so much so, that I could, as Blanche Du Bois rely on its kindness. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 01/15/09 at 03:12 PM An acutely philosophical poet pours a poem into this vastness [called earth] that surpasses all ordinary intuit understanding. And has done so with grace. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/15/09 at 04:30 PM I do believe you have nailed it with that last stanza. |
| Posted by Joy Sy on 01/20/09 at 05:56 PM The last stanza states quite nicely how insignificant our existence can be compared to rest of the universe. |
| Posted by Nancy Ames on 01/21/09 at 02:02 AM I like this a lot, letting go of our control-freak delusions of power, which is certainly fostered by modern technologies, is somehow reassuring and calming - very well written too.
One of my teachers used to say, "The more you know the more you know you don't know." |
