| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 01/11/09 at 07:28 PM Well painted, "word-wise" George. "Falling into the ocean" is terrific...sounds so accidental! Delighted. Thanks. |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 01/11/09 at 08:31 PM What a wonderful picture you've painted. So easy to become surrounded by it all. |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/11/09 at 10:37 PM It's a cliche to commend a writer for being able to say so much with so few words, but I'm going to say it anyway. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/12/09 at 02:06 AM A fine smooth flow to this image, like a sunset unveiling moment to moment. This has an intriguing ending - a challenge, I believe? |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 02/12/14 at 02:21 PM all I know is that nature has one hell of a spokesman in you, George. you paint it so like an impressionist and at the same time employing the palette of an existentialist. |
