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There's no indication for "minus you" on a thermometer

by Anne Engelen

Footsteps crackling frozen snow
Cold trace of beauty
On nature's white canvas


Thoughts of you are warming me
While kissed by winter
Walking through memories

01/11/2009

Posted on 01/11/2009
Copyright © 2021 Anne Engelen

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by George Hoerner on 01/11/09 at 02:18 PM

Very nice Anne. Quite delightful.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/11/09 at 05:03 PM

I enjoy the walking journey of this, brought to this moment. Crisp and satisfying.

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/11/09 at 06:16 PM

I like that thought a lot. Nice.

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 01/11/09 at 08:37 PM

Romantic, tender. Good flow, use of contrast effective.

Posted by Maria Massarella on 01/11/09 at 09:31 PM

I wonder did the title find you first, or the poem. It is beautiful, Anne ... the imagery, the sounds and the feel. I love the way you begin with speaking of footsteps in the frozen snow, and then warmth arises and in a breath envelopes one in love-memories... hugs*m.a

Posted by Shonda Creemer on 01/11/09 at 11:22 PM

Mmmmm...Yes, I quite like this.

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 01/14/09 at 02:00 PM

your work always exudes beauty and teems ever with love of life.

Posted by Colleen Sperry on 01/14/09 at 05:16 PM

I like this.. very sweet

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 01/19/09 at 03:47 AM

Good one Anne.....CharMin

Posted by Charles J Hannan on 01/20/09 at 09:33 AM

Amazing Anne...this is such a wonderful piece! MUAHS!!

Posted by Karl Waldbauer on 01/22/09 at 03:51 AM

Amazing and gratifying that such a concise piece can invoke a greater than lifesize image of warmth and love.

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