The Yearless Tree by Alison McKenzieEver green, ever synthetic,
Nonetheless imbued with
The Spirit of the season,
The Tree waits, patient, in the attic,
Vigilantly posed for the holiday markers -
The crispness of a falling barometer,
Carols drifting through the ductwork,
The scent of hot chocolate
And the snap of the opening door
As the Christmas family come for retrieval.
Purchased so that distant cousin counterparts,
Live Trees, would not have to suffer
For the sake of a few weeks of
Christmas cheer and Holiday merriment,
The synthetic Tree holds precious
The energy of Christmas past,
Cells possessed of sounds and smells,
Jingle bells and echoes of
Thank you, Moms!!! and
This is JUST what I wanteds
But this season,
The children are finally grown,
Scattered in directions so vast,
Mama cant gather them in
Or call them home,
And the year will go by,
Unmarked for once,
By the advent of Christmas
While the Trees hope drifts on the winds
Of a season unsung.
12/10/2008 Posted on 12/10/2008 Copyright © 2025 Alison McKenzie
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Laura Doom on 12/10/08 at 08:10 PM Did you know - you can calculate the age of a synthetic tree by dividing its kilowattage per hour by nanometres of accumulated dust? At least, that's what Santa told me last year...
Perhaps this poem presages the advent of the 'virtual Christmas', with everyone gathering round the ultra-flat monitor for a festive webcast.
Poignancy is but one element of merit in the substance of this seasonal lament. |
Posted by Meghan Helmich on 12/10/08 at 08:29 PM sad, alison. although, i would have to argue that i don't think it's so bad to bring in a real tree. agreed - its life is cut shorter by the season, however, what other time does a tree have to be such a beautiful addition to a home, adored by all who see it? :) |
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 12/10/08 at 10:15 PM ...ali, this is round in it's capture of moments...all 360degrees! i was up there in that attic, at the Christmas morns, excitment and even the plastic tree...i'm so old that when those un-real trees came it VOILA1 you were rich. deep, a caress in words of the lovely ol' tannebaun. |
Posted by Laura Doom on 12/10/08 at 10:32 PM And...a WW entry - deserves a generous helping of votes. Here's one that won't count, but it's a kind of 'moral support' thing :> |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 12/11/08 at 01:41 AM Such an engaging piece, drawing me into your Christmas rituals and changes. The prelit trees are all the rage - such an easy put-together now-a-days. Remember also that live Christmas tree farms are plantations with one goal - to grow and cut their trees for Christmas use. They will be cut and new ones planted, whether we buy them or not. Enjoy. |
Posted by Tony Whitaker on 12/11/08 at 04:45 AM I have to say this poem really put me in a funk. This will be my first year, since I was in the military 33 years ago, I will not be home for Christmas. I will miss my children most of all and my mother, brothers, sisters and friends. But I wish you a Merry Christmas, Alison, for your wonderful words 'unsung'. |
Posted by George Hoerner on 12/11/08 at 03:41 PM Really nice write Alison. We have a small, 2ft, tree we stand on a table. It stays wraped up all year long with lights and ornaments that seem quite content to wait 11 months of the year just to brighten up the world for a few weeks. But it is now our turn to visit the kids at some fairly central point to make sure they are surviving OK without a lot parental direction. |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 12/13/08 at 04:20 PM Strong reminder of how time marches on, and the little ones grow up to leave the nest, with all the more impact this time of year. |
Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 12/14/08 at 02:03 AM Heartfelt, Alison as readers perceive, and such a great title. But, like the heart itself, it's what's inside that counts, and I hope the magic that IS hanging about will find you and your scattered brood in moments of memory, thankful for the past, fully aware of this season, and looking forward to the rolling year bringing reunion to you all. Thanks. |
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