as he approached i saw the color of his eyes change from hate to hunger in the suns heat he slowed a step either sweat or tears welled in his eyes he took two more steps dropped to his knees his arms spread out his only word spoken was why?
12/03/2008
hate to hunger is an incredible concept george. this is amazing.
Wow! This one hooked me right in and I'm still on the edge of my seat.
Hmmm...for some reason "prodigal son" comes to mind upon reading this. And with that thought, I like how you leave it up the reader to interpret its true meaning. Powerful stuff no matter which way the reader slices it.
