carnival ride by Kristina Woodhill racing a flat tire legs pumping the ferris wheels rims kiss the fair ground 12/03/2008 Author's Note: edited Posted on 12/04/2008 Copyright © 2024 Kristina Woodhill Member Comments on this Poem Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/04/08 at 02:39 AM Great last line. What a terrific image. Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 12/04/08 at 03:05 AM HAHAHAHA! Somehow this event had to be a "ku". Terrific, and very colorful.....a high mileage model, indeed. Delighted. Thanks. Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 12/08/08 at 05:30 PM A scary thought, especially in traffic. Neat descriptiveness. Reminds me of the time my U-joint broke in Friday night traffic. Slugging along at about 20mph, with a lot of impatient drivers behind me. Maybe there's a poem in there too. :o) Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 12/09/08 at 01:52 AM That poor rim, not to speak of the tire! Quite an analogy! Return to the Previous Page   pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online All works Copyright © 2024 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)