Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by A. Paige White on 11/30/08 at 07:46 PM The cream will rise to the top, won't it? Bubbles of storm and speeds. Nice pen to the frothiness of foam. I find hope in thus ending of were... perhaps a new wave will bring new moments of foam, held as soon gone... |
Posted by Olivia Martin on 12/01/08 at 12:49 AM Beautifully written Wayne. Just remember one thing - life, and the people in it are surely like waves, and move steadily, in an ebb and flow.
Great job! |
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/01/08 at 06:48 PM You're quickly becoming one of my new favorite writers, man. Keep it up, please? Heh. |
Posted by Sarah Wolf on 12/02/08 at 08:49 PM I love the ending... |
Posted by Nanette Bellman on 12/03/08 at 08:11 PM you really nailed it here, especially with that last line. |
Posted by Kris Mara on 07/10/09 at 08:18 PM ...so, I keep trying to think of what to say...but all I can express after reading this over and over is that it brings tears...it hits my heart...and I know that just sounds kind of mushy...but your words here just cut through in that way...and this is all I can say...besides thank you for sharing |
Posted by Glenn Currier on 07/03/10 at 02:37 AM How delightful the description of the foam and then the revelation of the metaphor at the end. My senses tingled a little with the wisp of your words. Thanks, Wayne. |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 10/04/16 at 04:27 PM Deliciously sensual in a lingering fashion. I'm very glad to have read this POTD! Congrats! |