Running With Time by Lyss CopelandClocks wind their way across the path and the stone walls,
Reminding me of how much time has been wasted
Beneath my wandering feet.
I run now, finally,
Long past the time that I should have;
I run to catch up to you
Before you're lost in the grasp of
Forgotten memories and meaningless tears .
Night is falling faster and faster,
Yet the clocks keep ticking all around me,
Cutting my feet and arms with their sharpened second hands.
Their all-consuming ticking keeps growing louder
And I can feel the blood running down my face and hands
Yet, my bloody footprints leave no mark on the clocks' faces.
I can hear the sound of your heart beat growing
Louder and beyond that of the infernal ticking
And I run even faster, ignoring the clocks and time and pain,
Happy that I haven't lost you to the memoryless fog.
Finally, I turn the last corner
With your heartbeat singing in my ears
And while I cry out in pure joy,
I run to you, lying down upon the soft, earthy ground
And grasp your hand in mine,
Turn your face to gaze into your warm brown eyes.
Only your cloudy eyes gaze upon nothing;
My hand can feel the chill coming from your stony hand;
Your heartbeat has stopped.
And the clocks mock me with their ticking
As I scream in self-inflicting pain.
11/29/2008 Posted on 11/30/2008 Copyright © 2025 Lyss Copeland
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 11/30/08 at 04:30 AM I love the image of the clock in this. You give so much menace over to it, to knowing that there's nothing you can do about it. Really, really nicely done. |
Posted by Steven Kenworthy on 11/30/08 at 06:03 AM this is excellent...grim&delicious. you write well ahead of your years here...and everytime it seems. well done ac. |
Posted by Sarah Wolf on 12/02/08 at 08:46 PM Wow... :) |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 07/01/09 at 04:03 PM Congrats on achieving POTD Lyss. I can strongly relate to your piece, due to my son's earlier struggling with Clinical Depression. I wrote a slightly similar poem a few years back called Killing Time. It's in my Millennium library if you want to read it sometime. |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 07/01/09 at 11:02 PM A very fine POTD! Congrats! |
Posted by Tony Whitaker on 07/03/09 at 03:28 AM I couldn't help but think of Pink floyd's "Time" as I read this wonderfully compelling piece and reminding me we are all "shorter of breath and one day closer to death". Rod Serling could have made a "Twilight Zone" episode with the imagery from this tome to time! |
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