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The Drop (Senryu)

by Glenn Currier

if the rain's blanket
soaks up all your attention
you miss the drop's glory

11/21/2008

Posted on 11/21/2008
Copyright © 2024 Glenn Currier

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by A. Paige White on 11/21/08 at 04:21 PM

Oh, this is good. Glory us some more, with another drop or three... Glenn! Excellent.

Posted by Jeffrey Parren on 11/21/08 at 05:04 PM

But I thought there was no "I" in team, haha. I really liked this. Perhaps sometimes it is adventageous to see minute and the big picture...to appreciate it better. ~JPP

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 11/21/08 at 10:03 PM

Interesting perspective. Quantity may nullify quality perhaps? At least in perspective.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/21/08 at 11:28 PM

I like this a lot. This is a fine example of possibly missing the tree within the forest, but I much prefer your use of "rain's blanket" soaking up attention. Thank you.

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