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by Brynn Dizack


there isn't much
left to say.

you are a void to be filled up, and
i am the wrong shape
and size.

11/12/2008

Posted on 11/13/2008
Copyright © 2019 Brynn Dizack

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 11/13/08 at 06:18 AM

I know that feeling. Good stuff.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/13/08 at 04:31 PM

Succinct and well said.

Posted by Ava Blu on 01/23/11 at 09:21 PM

I am that feeling.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/24/11 at 06:08 PM

Wow! So much said in very few lines. The way I like 'em!

Posted by Mo Couts on 08/17/11 at 04:31 AM

To the point and honest with a punch.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/25/15 at 03:27 PM

Congrats on POTD! Still a fine example of not one unnecessary word.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/25/15 at 06:57 PM

Excellent! Congrats on POTD.

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