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one woman firing squad
by Dani Roseyou,
of little faith
stood
valiantly
within the line
of fire.
i,
whose laughter
you described
as the sound
of a thousand
windows
shattering,
toyed carelessly
with a verbal
trigger-
and
i
did
not
hesitate. 11/03/2008 Posted on 11/04/2008
Copyright © 2025 Dani Rose
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 11/05/08 at 01:48 AM I would hate to be the target of your verbal fire Dani. Good poem....CharMin |
| Posted by Meghan Helmich on 11/17/08 at 09:06 PM the line breaks at the end shoot that rhythm into the sky. i love it. |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 02/11/13 at 12:18 PM This is powerful. I guess we've all been there. I love this. Fantastic POTD! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/11/13 at 01:14 PM Nicely put. Congrats on POTD! |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/11/13 at 11:13 PM Congrats on POTD! I enjoyed the structure of this very much. That ending is quite deadly. Well done. |
| Posted by Magnolia Moonpie on 02/12/13 at 12:03 AM Wonderfully tense, like a drawn bow, and it releases so well. Thank you very much! |
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