|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Nanette Bellman on 10/21/08 at 03:03 PM|
smiling with your lips is over-rated. you tell 'em Dave.
|Posted by Joe Cramer on 10/21/08 at 05:40 PM|
... well done.... excellent imagery.....
|Posted by Alisa Js on 10/22/08 at 11:54 PM|
beautifully penned... alisa
|Posted by Glenn Currier on 11/15/08 at 05:10 AM|
YOu have me going with this poem... never really examining my smile in my long life, but I know the feeling of smiling with my eyes... just never thought of it till now. Delightful poem, Dave.
|Posted by Maria Massarella on 11/24/08 at 11:12 PM|
*and who could resist such a smile! I love the imagery and wordflow, sentiments, warmth and glow... m.a
|Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 09/15/09 at 06:23 PM|
I like reading about the parts of people that makes them uniquely them, and this really adds to your resume. Thanks, Dave.
|Posted by Tony Whitaker on 09/16/09 at 11:49 AM|
I loved the wordplay and the imagery and, of course, the ending. I guess that is everything. Nice!!!
|Posted by Phil P Robson on 11/04/09 at 09:46 PM|
I love this poem, this is what smiles should be like...
|Posted by Allison Smith on 11/07/09 at 06:08 AM|