| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Nanette Bellman on 10/21/08 at 03:03 PM smiling with your lips is over-rated. you tell 'em Dave. |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 10/21/08 at 05:40 PM ... well done.... excellent imagery..... |
| Posted by Alisa Js on 10/22/08 at 11:54 PM beautifully penned... alisa |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 11/15/08 at 05:10 AM YOu have me going with this poem... never really examining my smile in my long life, but I know the feeling of smiling with my eyes... just never thought of it till now. Delightful poem, Dave. |
| Posted by Maria Massarella on 11/24/08 at 11:12 PM *and who could resist such a smile! I love the imagery and wordflow, sentiments, warmth and glow... m.a |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 09/15/09 at 06:23 PM I like reading about the parts of people that makes them uniquely them, and this really adds to your resume. Thanks, Dave. |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 09/16/09 at 11:49 AM I loved the wordplay and the imagery and, of course, the ending. I guess that is everything. Nice!!! |
| Posted by Phil P Robson on 11/04/09 at 09:46 PM I love this poem, this is what smiles should be like... |
| Posted by Allison Smith on 11/07/09 at 06:08 AM *smiles |
