| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 09/28/08 at 10:13 PM Oh Kristina! This has to be one of the absolute best fall haiku I've ever read. From blushing leaves that immediately brought golden red leaves before my inner eyes to the strip tease ending a deserved blush. This is fantastic. |
| Posted by Melissa Panther on 09/28/08 at 10:53 PM Perfection! |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 09/29/08 at 02:38 PM Really great write m'lady. What else is there to say. |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 09/30/08 at 06:46 PM Kristina, this is so wonderfully vivid. Autumn is truly a second spring...when every leaf is a flower. Thanks. |
| Posted by Paul Lastovica on 09/30/08 at 09:02 PM nature is the greatest tease of all - especially during spring and fall. |
| Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 09/30/08 at 11:14 PM Ahhhhh! This really is just perfect! |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 10/01/08 at 11:33 PM Clever personification! |
| Posted by Steven Kenworthy on 10/02/08 at 02:29 AM this is sexy in a very natural way. like making love in the woods with a camera far out there somewhere...and the entire audience is shocked, or wait, i basically just repeated what you already said only in a lame way. regardless, i love this. i have a hard time loving nature poetry, this though...burns. |
| Posted by Stephan Anstey on 10/03/08 at 03:27 PM ok, i blushed. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/03/08 at 06:05 PM (In)decent seasonal poem and play on words Kristina. :o) |
