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completion.
by Michelle FloydI feel so whole,
I'm going to break. 09/27/2008 Author's Note: of paper napkins and post-it notes.
Posted on 09/27/2008
Copyright © 2024 Michelle Floyd
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/27/08 at 04:40 PM Fascinating dichotomy at work in this piece. How two lines and a title can say so much. If you haven't already, you may want to read Laurie Blum's Fresh Dawn. Another great example of a two line poetry. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 10/28/14 at 02:58 PM Great POTD! It stops me fast and lets me ponder. I like. |
| Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 10/29/14 at 01:25 AM Wonderful. I believe I know what you mean, and I feel this way. |
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