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the wasp and the bee

by Andrew S Adams

this morning, i woke up
and had my cigarette.

in the midst of what
usually cleans the cobwebs
i notice a wasp
and a bee;

and, let's just say that
this wasp was not playing
so nicely.

and i think for
but a quick moment
(right before the nicotine hits)

that maybe i should get in there
and break it up

but

my hand in
that war
is the death of us all

and so,
i sit

watching the world work.

09/18/2008

Posted on 09/18/2008
Copyright © 2024 Andrew S Adams

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Keith McFarlane on 09/18/08 at 08:08 AM

This one packs its own sting -- well done! We do need to lay off with the interventions...

Posted by Nanette Bellman on 09/18/08 at 02:31 PM

It's amazing how big of picture you can see from such little things. Great read.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 09/18/08 at 03:32 PM

The simplicity of this is most pleasing - the last three lines most satisfying.

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 09/18/08 at 04:41 PM

A lot of my mornings seem to run like that, but I think you described it best. Well done, sir.

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/16/09 at 03:07 PM

"my hand in that war is the death of us all"- that says it all! I would have killed them, rather than risk a sting. Loked this piece alot- good job

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