| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 09/18/08 at 02:25 AM A reflection of poor hygiene. Fun...CharMin |
| Posted by Nanette Bellman on 09/18/08 at 02:50 PM This is genius Chris. Genius. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 09/18/08 at 03:09 PM Oh, yeah.... nailed it. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 09/18/08 at 03:17 PM A social commentary on a sad situation! Right on! |
| Posted by Michael Faraday on 09/21/08 at 03:59 AM zen-like. enjoyed. cheers, m |
| Posted by Don Matley on 09/25/08 at 06:36 PM Had to read it twice to make sure not to impose my expected ending on yours.
I have been guilty of such vanity, especially in my youth. Good work. Cheers. |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 09/25/08 at 10:25 PM Wonderful!! Love it Chris. |