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California Sunrise

by Kristina Woodhill


This is your sunrise, John,
This is your day to crow!
This is the day of your birth
On this Earth;
The glow from your first peek
Is starting to show.

This is your moon rise, John,
Reflections of wishes to come.
Star twinkles vie
For that look in your eye
And a wave of your wand
That they'll be the first one.

This is your Act One, John,
Your curtain beginning to rise.
There's Mom and Dad
Center front, holding hands,
With the light from your sun
And your moon in their eyes.

09/06/2008

Author's Note: Celebrating our dear friends' first grandchild, born last night on the same day as his great grandfather. How sweet it is! Welcome, John Robert.

Posted on 09/07/2008
Copyright © 2021 Kristina Woodhill

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 09/07/08 at 06:15 PM

Wonderful greeting for a newborn! The parents will keep this as a lasting memorial to the day and I am sure pass it on. Unique for John Robert.

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 09/07/08 at 10:46 PM

...kristina, lovely lacing of a gorgeous pic o' life...a solid piece.

Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 09/08/08 at 01:10 AM

This is a cock-a-doodle-doo of a poem...charming, joyous, and I love it!

Posted by Keith McFarlane on 09/08/08 at 02:54 AM

Wonderfully positive and affirming without too much sugar -- day, night, the theater of life, all fairly represented for the young one. Very nice indeed!

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 09/08/08 at 03:34 AM

Nice poem of greeting Kris...CharMin

Posted by Melissa Arel on 09/08/08 at 04:37 AM

Aww what a great poem! How beautiful!

Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 09/09/08 at 03:35 PM

Wonderful :) Simply beautiful.

Posted by David R Spellman on 09/10/08 at 10:04 PM

Really lovely Kristina. A wonderful gift to the newborn and family!

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