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Thunder's Roar
by Brian Francis
Somewhere in the distance
I can hear the thunder roar
Rain drops pitter-patter
At the door
Somehow all the storm clouds
Rise and then they fall
Bringing cool refreshment
Nature’s call
And while laying here
Feeling your warm touch
Shivers of excitement
Seem too much
The gentle supple friction
Of our love's embrace
The rhythm intertwining
Face to face
Passion’s magic moments
That yearning from within
Rapture in that instant
Does begin
Somewhere deep inside me
I can hear the thunder roar
Touching lips to lips
Wanting more 08/10/2008 Posted on 08/10/2008
Copyright © 2024 Brian Francis
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/11/08 at 12:45 AM Very intimate - I enjoyed the rhyming pattern to this and the sensory experience. |
| Posted by Marjorie Anne Reagan on 08/11/08 at 03:14 AM Intimacy shared is always beautiful. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/11/08 at 02:15 PM Evocative combination of internal and external forces Brian; nature+thunder+passion = the best roar of them all. |
| Posted by Heide McAlister-Bates on 08/13/08 at 11:32 PM I'm not a huge fan of rhyme, but it works in this piece. It reads like a song to me. |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 08/16/08 at 02:07 AM Really nice Brian. It just flows so well. |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/18/09 at 03:24 PM Beautiful, filled with deep emotion and very romantic! Good job- enjoyable read |
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