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Affection (haiku)

by Alison McKenzie

ItÂ’s so nice to be
Bathed in the tenderness of
A far away friend

08/08/2008

Author's Note: For a couple of dear friends here at Pathetic, but also, for Joe. So lovely to experience.

Posted on 08/08/2008
Copyright © 2024 Alison McKenzie

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by A. Paige White on 08/08/08 at 08:27 PM

You musta got one of those super sweet pm's this morning too! Isn't it wonderful to be appreciated and have them tell you so, as only a poet can! Big hugs to you from way down south... ;-D

Posted by James Zealy on 08/08/08 at 09:13 PM

Well now, friemds are as friends does, and you do plenty.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/09/08 at 12:54 AM

Sweet.

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 08/09/08 at 02:02 PM

...hey, ali, hand me the soap, you missed a place in the small of your back, a place you can't reach, lovely hi-kuuuuuu....

Posted by Joe Cramer on 08/11/08 at 05:09 PM

... this is wonderful... so thoughtful... this Joe guy must be awesome... I'm jealous!!!

Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 08/11/08 at 06:09 PM

Very nice haiku, smh

Posted by Laurie Blum on 08/11/08 at 06:20 PM

Beautifully stated.

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 08/12/08 at 07:57 PM

It is nice to read A nice poem of tenderness. Such as your sweet poem. ....CharMin

Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 08/13/08 at 04:51 PM

This happened to me last night. How perfect the poem describes it. I will link this along to her...

Posted by George Hoerner on 08/14/08 at 03:52 PM

Nice one m'lady. Keep it going.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/14/08 at 06:48 PM

YUP...I can relate to this, especially thanks to Pathetic.org. Congrats on hitting no. 1 Alison.

Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 08/14/08 at 07:09 PM

hugs!! i love you.

Posted by Tony Whitaker on 08/15/08 at 04:40 AM

This seems so appropriate for me so far away from home...Very nice Alison.

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/02/09 at 03:05 PM

My friends are also far away. Beautiful, loving piece! Well done Haiku.

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