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by Maria Massarella

when
all the poetry
that is Life
will have been
written

when
all the words
of adoration
will have
been spoken

when
all the hymns
of praise
will have
been sung

there
will be the
eternal flame
to illuminate
the spirit

to incandesce
sublime
this infinite
love of
you




~ m.a

12/26/2004

Posted on 08/03/2008
Copyright © 2024 Maria Massarella

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 08/03/08 at 02:38 PM

I sure hope so. Heh. Beautifully expressed.

Posted by Mary Frances Spencer on 08/03/08 at 04:01 PM

Gorgeous! MFS

Posted by JD Clay on 08/05/08 at 07:06 PM

I recall this poem on the day after who knows when, the radiance it exudes and the message of a universal 'you' carried on such delicate wings. I imagine this written by a guardian Angel for m.a. It speaks of you, who too, are as angelic as they come.

Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 08/20/08 at 08:35 PM

The Sky would give this poem to you. It is for you/life/us/all inside and out. No one, I think, could this come from -with all of its graciousness and sincerity, -no one could this come from other than

    y o u 
m'angel
Posted by Don Matley on 09/26/08 at 12:45 PM

Very beautiful but simple words and the statement flows naturally to its conclusion. The absence of the 'steadfastness of the word "will"' in the final stanza brings us clearly to the conclusion. At least it seems to me upon reading.

Posted by Maude Curtis on 03/25/09 at 03:16 AM

words of love spoken only from someone who knows

Posted by Glenn Currier on 12/16/10 at 03:17 PM

I love and agree with what J.D. and Elizabeth said above. This is so YOU, the open-heartedness, the transcendent vision. You are a matron of the spirit-to-human connection for us on this site. I fall into your spirit freely and with confidence that I will be softly lifted on angel wings. Blessings and peace, my friend. And thanks.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 12/19/10 at 12:35 AM

So lovely and full of faith in this relationship. Thank you.

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