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THOSE POEMS by W. Mahlon PurdinDifference from a live one to a dead one
Is easy to see in poetry
Because it just happened.
Because it just happened.
Right in front of you.
I saw poems die all the time once.
They were rhyming along
Swaggering with dusty rhythm
And then they stopped moving.
And then they stopped moving.
And then they stopped, moving.
A few, even as they were still and unrestless,
Torn from a book and tossed to the ground,
Dead for sure, still moved, still moved.
I remember every one, those poems.
They were structured like Housman,
Or free like Sandburg. Or long like Vachel Lindsay.
They were cryptic like Dickinson, or too brief
Like Yeats. They still move. They still move.
They, still, move.
But then, there were those other poems, too
The ones the winds blew away.
Many more of them.
They were well written but unremembered.
I watched them drifting away, carried off.
What's the difference: the living and the dead?
When a poem dies, it dies right in front of you.
When a poem lives, it lives because of you.
They were all written in different hands
They were all there for us to see,
They all had their wonder plans
Some are, some will never be.
Seems a shame all those dead poems.
Seems a shame all those dead poems.
But for the living, would've all been a waste.
It's something that must be faced. 05/06/2008 Posted on 08/01/2008 Copyright © 2026 W. Mahlon Purdin
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Olivia Weinkein on 08/01/08 at 06:52 AM I really, really like this. I think it's a good tribute to poetry. So many lines stood out. Definately going on my fav list. |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 08/01/08 at 08:53 AM Outstanding! |
| Posted by Olivia Weinkein on 08/01/08 at 04:16 PM ok, found out this isn't really about poetry and can see it now, though it works on so many different levels. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/01/08 at 05:44 PM My POTD pick for today - really well written and developed. Not too short, not too long, just right, in fact. ;) |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/03/08 at 02:58 PM Much truth and wisdom, I like what you've done here. |
| Posted by Steve Michaels on 03/11/12 at 06:36 AM Woah! Powerful stuff. |
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