| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Mary Frances Spencer on 07/30/08 at 09:16 PM I'm right there too!!! MFS |
| Posted by Brian Francis on 07/31/08 at 02:02 PM You too? Cobwebs one of my favorite things to examine when I was a pup. nice one. --bf |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 08/01/08 at 05:15 PM Right on! |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/01/08 at 08:38 PM Most excellent!! |
| Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 08/03/08 at 02:48 PM sparkling cobwebs and bright confusion....yeh, that's what is in my head, too. I like this! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/05/08 at 04:48 PM Nice one Jim from a visual and spiritual point of view. |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 08/07/08 at 01:48 AM i think everyone can relate to this! |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 08/09/08 at 07:38 AM Love the "spun" wonder of this- the web of one's life exposed by the sun's light on it's dewdrops. The naming of the years gives a very old feel to this fresh, brilliant view- and the fact that a cobweb, like a life has an order built into it, yet may have a confusing look, adds to our wonderment. |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 08/11/08 at 03:40 AM I love the 'ku' forms and this one is done in the true spirit of the form, as well as reminding me of how old I am... |
