| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 07/23/08 at 04:59 PM The sights within ones eyes can bring one sighs.
Good poem Chris...CharMin |
| Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 07/23/08 at 06:13 PM My floaters are an aura to an oncoming migraine, easily controlled by siezure medicine at this time it seems so I do understand your question and I am sorry your opthamologist was confused by the phenom. smh |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 07/23/08 at 08:56 PM Right! Some symbolism here beyond the floaters in the retinas.
My ophthamologist said the floaters are caused by the movement of a gel like substance which was there before birth. |
| Posted by Brian Francis on 07/25/08 at 12:32 AM I love the way you bring those common frustrations to us in this piece. Nice work -bf |
| Posted by Alisa Js on 07/25/08 at 01:54 AM It does make one wonder... the answers to the questions not stated... I enjoyed this one.
aloha..;-0 |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 07/13/09 at 01:08 PM Brilliant title and metaphor for the awarenessless and carelessness of another. I have known this kind of sadness and hurt. It stings indeed. |
