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Vacation Give Away

by A. Paige White


                   The best way to know
                  you are officially on vacation;


The voice of your GPS yawns
while giving you her usually energetic report.

You are still 2 1/2 hours from today's destination.

07/14/2008

Author's Note:

A found seashell down by the seeshore
True poetry. And not a bit pathetic.

See Gentle Summer for a look at a crab manor

Posted on 07/15/2008
Copyright © 2021 A. Paige White

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Alison McKenzie on 07/15/08 at 04:56 PM

LOL. You have such a magic for capturing a moment, you genius woman, you!!!

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 10/28/08 at 11:48 PM

LOL!! When the GPS gets bored perhaps it is time to stop for the day! Very funny look at vacation traveling.

Posted by Glenn Currier on 06/28/09 at 06:41 PM

You giggle me, locating my funny bone, with deft precision, and in only seconds, no 2.5 hour wait.

Posted by Kristen Heyl on 05/19/10 at 02:02 AM

I love the imagery and idea behind this poem. It really makes one think :)

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 11/12/12 at 02:19 PM

I love this short but sweet poem and ain't it the truth about GPS, whose voice though clearly female is all business and no play. if only her voice was made to sound like Marylin Monroe, I would her direction less seriously. In fact I wouldn't care where that voice led me as long as it got me there, where ever that is. The good news is that I didn't have to program a GPS to arrive at this ode, I just came by it naturally.

Posted by Gail Wolper on 08/05/14 at 07:28 AM

I love this one! Wish that you had more than 40 in your library!

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