| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 07/14/08 at 04:29 AM I could see his face lit up with the colors of the stars as you tell this.... |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 07/14/08 at 02:28 PM I could see the fireworks in your words Mel.
Good writing...CharMin |
| Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 07/15/08 at 09:54 PM sounds like you got to see the wonder through his eyes and that is a view worth seeing. smh |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 07/16/08 at 06:20 PM Ah! a fireworks poem worth reading. Thanks for sharing this precious moment with us and the mothervision you write into our hearts. |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 07/19/08 at 05:15 AM Mel, I do love this first line...especially the cracklepops! |
