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Bouncing
by Joe CramerBouncing on my roof
The oak tree sheds its bounty
Bringing life, anew. 07/10/2008 Posted on 07/10/2008
Copyright © 2025 Joe Cramer
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 07/11/08 at 05:24 PM Ah, the beauty of Fall...hey and you did it without using any of those new 100 words!!!!!!!!!!!!1 |
| Posted by Julie Adams on 07/13/08 at 08:19 PM beautiful, sensory, and succinct...living in the City, nature really calls to me through poetry...a pleasure to read u again, peace, jewels |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 07/14/08 at 12:30 AM Wonderfall!! :D |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 07/15/08 at 04:16 PM Great first line - a fine follow-through. WEll done. |
| Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 07/16/08 at 01:46 AM That bouncing branch leaves a real impression. Nice. |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 07/16/08 at 05:42 PM You perk my ears for the kernels of live bouncing all around me that I most often ignore. |
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