| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Mary Frances Spencer on 07/01/08 at 06:40 AM Burn baby burn! I am enjoying all of these "poetry challenges"...love your last line here! MFS |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 07/01/08 at 12:03 PM "The caloric value of burning imagery." Love that line! |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 07/01/08 at 03:19 PM ali, this is top-0-ola, love the use of words, i.e. "rhythm' of ideas...the rhythm does have a life separate from the words themselves and it's a keen eye that sees that, 'caloric value of burning energy' is kissable. |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 07/01/08 at 04:38 PM ... this is outstanding!!! |
| Posted by Matthew Sharp on 07/01/08 at 11:49 PM the rhythm of ideas transformed like words in slingshots burning the ammo.
i love when you wake the dreamer:) |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 07/02/08 at 03:43 PM Excellent description! Wish I had written this...glad you did!!! :o) |
| Posted by Jean Mollett on 07/02/08 at 07:13 PM Hi Alison,
Great write. Your words say it so beautifully. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 07/03/08 at 03:48 PM Well done Ali....CharMin |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 07/04/08 at 03:42 PM Reading your poem is like opening a handcrafted jewelery box and finding stars there, shimmering with the richness of a soul made manifest. Great response to the challenge. |
