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poetry is

by Mary Frances Spencer

the search for
expression heart soul vision

words that bleed
tears

06/25/2008

Author's Note: O.K. I'm answering Glenn Currier's challenge here. Short, succinct...??? MFS

Posted on 06/26/2008
Copyright © 2024 Mary Frances Spencer

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Glenn Currier on 06/26/08 at 12:33 PM

Oh wow! You focus the artist's impulse with exquisite expression. The last two lines could be a poem in themselves - perfect!

Posted by Jean Mollett on 06/26/08 at 05:58 PM

Hi Mary Frances, Great write. You've expression so well. It's Beautiful, Simply Beautiful.

Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 06/26/08 at 09:54 PM

I agree with Glen on the last two line, perfect and succinct. Bravo. smh

Posted by Keith D Allison on 06/28/08 at 08:54 PM

nice it move. :)

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/29/08 at 02:17 PM

Concise and to the point. Well stated...tears of joy and sorrow and all points in-between.

Posted by Don Coffman on 06/29/08 at 05:24 PM

I'm in agreement! Truth well put in lovely words.

Posted by Laurie Blum on 06/30/08 at 09:11 PM

I couldnt have said it any better!! Perfect!

Posted by Maria Massarella on 07/02/08 at 09:56 PM

I love what your eye sees ... m.a

Posted by Stephan Anstey on 10/03/08 at 03:39 PM

so you're saying poetry isn't a cup of joe and a pumpkin muffin. I'm confused.

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