| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 05/16/08 at 12:27 AM ...chip, chip, chipping away of values...lil' by lil' til homogeniety arises...charlie |
| Posted by Keith McFarlane on 05/16/08 at 02:38 PM good capture, mate -- forward motion, progress -- maybe even swapping one evil for another. the iconic consumerist holy war -- nicely done! |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 05/17/08 at 01:11 AM Excellent symbolism of the traditional, though very strong, very slowly giving way to the modern. |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 05/17/08 at 05:22 AM the ending, that cracks me up! great read! |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 06/12/08 at 05:00 AM I like Charlie's comment. The image you paint brings a big smile to my face and makes me glad I live on this particular continent. What a sight this must have been. |
