Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by George Hoerner on 05/15/08 at 01:26 AM WOW Sandy this is really a great write. Looking back I see the very few "connections" that will last somehow even if just in memory. Nicely done. |
Posted by Alison McKenzie on 05/15/08 at 05:24 AM I like the honesty of this, how it captures both the real and the sureal, the aging, the laughing and the crying of a relationship. |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/16/08 at 01:52 PM Powerful and beautiful sketching of a soul mate relationship Sandy. I love the elusion to reincarnation at the end; icing on the wedding cake so to speak. |
Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 05/17/08 at 12:04 PM "...ordained" sums it up nicely. Such things are...and never change. |
Posted by Glenn Currier on 09/07/09 at 03:39 PM It is refreshing reading about how two paths cross and result in a soul encounter. It does make one wonder about the "ordained" thing. I sometimes wander there myself with my relationship that certainly seems to be one of those "meant to be" thangs. |