| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Mary Frances Spencer on 05/14/08 at 10:29 PM Lovely...I feel it! MFS |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 05/18/08 at 01:41 AM Would that all days begin with such deliberation
A sense of the divine awakening all other senses
to exhileration! |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 05/20/08 at 12:07 PM Ahhh as beautifully poetic as it's author (you know I am a big fan)Romantic and whimsical... I love the line " While sipping drops of morning sun" Love it! |
| Posted by JD Clay on 05/21/08 at 02:47 AM Have you any idea how difficult it is to comment on a poem who's title commandeers the tongue? Especially with a poem as delicate as the one breaking through the portal of your being. It took me the better part of six days. Shhhhhhhh! |
| Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 05/21/08 at 09:54 PM Ditto JD, I have just lived and breathed this one all week. It is the essence of beauty and poetry. smh |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 05/22/08 at 12:53 PM You remind me, even in snippets, why Italian is the most beautiful of languages..I am speechless. Silent, you might say, in awe. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/26/08 at 06:24 PM This poem is full of spiritual light, like the spring sun shinng through an afternoon window. I especially like these lines: Meraviglioso the feel as inner lightflow merges with the outer
I know not where the you begins or the me ends.
Graze Maria. :o)
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| Posted by Carolyn Coville on 06/08/08 at 05:36 AM it's been awhile since I've read you (or any other poems for that matter), as I have been so preoccupied with life, but your words...they still leave goosebumps! <3 |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 06/11/08 at 01:06 AM Tender is the light born from an open heart and laid out gently for our eyes to feast and our ears to tingle. Beautiful. |
