| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 02/26/08 at 09:02 AM I really like the imagery in this. It makes me want to roll up a doobie and go back 30 years and trip through your words...
I like your style MFS! |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 02/26/08 at 09:07 AM The thing most dreams always lack is completion, waking often leaves us wanting more. Outside of nightmares it would be desirable to stay in the dream. I've experienced that too. I love the
dream "threshold" you write of here. You've given it an intriguing voice. Delighted. Thanks. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/26/08 at 03:24 PM A fairly accurate description recalling my own dream experiences. And like you I don't always remember details, but the emotion stays with me. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 03/02/08 at 04:56 AM A dreamy poem Mary.....CharMin |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 03/03/08 at 03:36 PM I like how you progress into and out of this dream state. You've given it mystery, color, motion, and you leave it just out of my reach. Nice. |
| Posted by Paul Lastovica on 01/25/11 at 12:15 AM once every so often i remember fragments of details through the day; as a child I had a recurring dream where I was tied up; pebbles would tumble down onto me, then rocks, and stones ever increasing in size. It's the only dream i vividly remember to this day. |
