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wax on

by Kristina Woodhill

Car wash splatterings
doused metal boxes on wheels
spring wax - winter's wane

02/09/2008

Author's Note: snow is melting, melting down the drain

Posted on 02/09/2008
Copyright © 2025 Kristina Woodhill

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 02/09/08 at 10:19 PM

I love the "metal boxes" of this ... the perspective! And then the brillian "spring wax" and "wane"-- such delightful, crafted playfulness!

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/09/08 at 10:50 PM

Who has ever loved a completely clean car inside and out...in a shiny coat of wax cannot relate to this???

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/10/08 at 04:47 AM

Sadly, yes. Still a great image on your part though.

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