| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 02/02/08 at 10:30 PM ...love the turn from ' the snow' to an all encompassing range o' life...brrr on both snow and man's inhumanity to man...good 'un, peace, chaz |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/02/08 at 11:42 PM I'm a sucker for anything snow right now and this one delivers well. I like the hardy pines sticking their tongues out, and your exploration within this heavy whiteness of man's relationships. |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 07/19/09 at 05:56 AM The images depict the blending of snow and sky, but your moral at the end creates a distinct horizon. The last line especially packs a wallop and sounds a truth about the postmodern scene. I love what you have said about the survival shows. They are so cheap in so many ways... the jagged edge of human ego on stark display. |
