| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by David Garner on 02/01/08 at 04:42 PM I love the images here, especially in the middle of your poem, so specific and unique like "mica mines" and "fold-down toaster." Great poem! |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 02/02/08 at 12:50 AM Reminds me of a spot in a nearby State Park that I frequently hike in. Also containing an old mica mine that some still turn over the ground in search of other things. Very nicely said! |
| Posted by Meghan Helmich on 10/07/08 at 01:00 PM very peaceful imagery. congrats on POTD. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/07/08 at 02:33 PM Thought provoking piece Don. Congrats on POTD! My parents still have one of those fold down toasters as a keep sake from when they were first married, and it still works! |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 10/07/08 at 03:01 PM This has a great flow and I love the "mica mines beneath my feet." Now I want to see that fold-down toaster. Congrats on POTD! |
| Posted by LK Barrett on 11/03/08 at 06:57 PM Your poem gives me the sense of walking that path-lovely, subtle, well-crafted. Thank you! |
