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A Morning Haiku

by Charles E Minshall

The sunrise appears,
We rise up from our warm beds
Bah to work we go.

    

01/29/2008

Posted on 01/29/2008
Copyright © 2024 Charles E Minshall

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by A. Paige White on 01/29/08 at 07:16 PM

A better mourning of morning, I can't imagine, lol. I felt that exact way this morning.

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 01/29/08 at 08:05 PM

...charlie, bah to work...i love it!!!! good 'un...peace, chaz

Posted by David R Spellman on 01/30/08 at 02:02 AM

Tough to get out of that warm bed some mornings... but always thankful to be able to! Good one Charles.

Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 01/30/08 at 05:21 AM

Bah indeed! You sum it up for all in this...

Posted by Alison McKenzie on 01/30/08 at 07:07 PM

I can't tell you how many mornings I've just wanted to lay there, all snuggled. Thanks for expressing this, Charles. Blessings!!!

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/02/08 at 01:54 PM

Wow...I think this stands for a lot of us here. Great capture in just a few lines. 5 years to go before I can retire!

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 02/02/08 at 07:39 PM

Ahhhh! I can now sleep in but don't! Maybe it is because I no longer have to go to work! LOL! You've caught a universal feeling very succinctly!

Posted by JD Clay on 03/31/08 at 02:13 AM

You've hit the mark with this one Charlie. I finally figured it out. Life is a game so I gave up work. Now I go to play.

Posted by Jean Mollett on 04/18/08 at 02:44 AM

Hi Charles, Great write. I know the feelin. I'm not working right now. Hope to be again. :)

Posted by Glenn Currier on 06/12/08 at 04:43 AM

Bah, indeed. I'm about to bah bah bah all the way down stairs and out the door in about 3 months. Ahm already tired - don't know why I would want to get re-tired. What an odd word. So I will just look forward to extended vacations... and a lot more poetry reading and writing. Bahk to the muse.

Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 07/15/08 at 08:04 AM

I love the Bah of it.

Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 07/15/08 at 09:56 PM

Somedays I wake with the bahs and someday's I wake with the hah's but maybe it is just the mirror...smh

Posted by Sarah Wolf on 10/06/08 at 08:34 PM

The really brought me up... and then back down... It makes me feel bipolar... :)

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