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Fair Warning - tetractys

by Kristina Woodhill


rocks
sporting
odd pointed
human shaped limbs


the shrines now arising may bury you

01/25/2008

Posted on 01/25/2008
Copyright © 2025 Kristina Woodhill

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by A. Paige White on 01/25/08 at 05:47 PM

This is great and the pyramid shape is a plus!

Posted by Alison McKenzie on 01/25/08 at 07:24 PM

I SAW that newsclip of the humanoid-shaped thingy, a rock maybe, or a shadow....WEIRD. http://cosmos.bcst.yahoo.com/up/player/popup/?rn=3906861&cl=6073098&ch=4226721&src=news

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 01/25/08 at 07:49 PM

This easily adds to and comments on the image itself. Well done. It adds to the mystery. Thanks.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/28/08 at 06:05 PM

Brings back a flood of documentaries and movies...Chariots of the Gods, 2001, etc.

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 02/05/08 at 05:59 PM

Suggests to me (shape of the poem and then last line) that civilizations rise and fall and are buried. Title suggests to me that fossils are left for future civilizations to find. Is this all too far out?

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