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Morning Chill

by Brian Francis

 

Seasons pass to fall from summer.

Life grows still and forests slumber.

Reds, Yellows, and browns from green

the passing moments of life, unseen.

Leaves that fall to blanket the ground

Moments lost cannot be found

Fires smolder in the morning's cold

The scent still lingers pungent bold

Steamed up windows, crystal panes

outside, the chilly country lanes.

Coffee warms a deep-chilled soul.

Crisp, clear is the church bells toll

 

01/14/2008

Posted on 01/15/2008
Copyright © 2024 Brian Francis

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/15/08 at 03:48 PM

Most enjoyable read. I like how you go from outside to inside activities, and add smells and frosty windows.

Posted by George Hoerner on 01/15/08 at 04:15 PM

Very nicely written. Very smooth and descriptive of this time of year.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/17/08 at 05:43 PM

Both vivid and spiritually moving. Nice one Brian!

Posted by Anne Engelen on 01/19/08 at 03:35 PM

Love the flow of this!

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