Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Julie Adams on 01/14/08 at 02:56 PM I love the tight imagery and flow of this piece...very visual and concrete...it was a pleasure to read u this morning, peace & happy writings, *jewels* |
Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 01/15/08 at 05:39 PM This flows beautifully and I love, love, love how I can see, taste and smell every line. |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/18/08 at 04:06 PM Marvelous poem, delightful subject. |
Posted by Leonard M Hawkes on 02/21/08 at 05:00 AM Beautiful. And I'd take Spring at any cost right now! |
Posted by Anne Engelen on 11/08/08 at 09:06 AM Tulips are my favorite flowers. This poem is so rich and yet so simple. Wonderful! |
Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 08/31/09 at 05:50 PM Sensational poem!
"let the sun smile upon you" oh poet! |
Posted by Alex Smyth on 08/31/09 at 10:58 PM One of the best combinations of passion and poetry I have ever read! Congratulations on POTD and thanks for this uplifting post. |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/31/09 at 11:34 PM Delighted to see this as POTD! |
Posted by S. Pelham Flood on 05/10/10 at 06:17 PM the rhythm in this is like the accelerated heartbeat generally attached to the passion described. love it. |