| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 01/09/08 at 08:42 PM Your poem really does have the shape of a rose... and one that is more closed, than open... where the beauty to be unfurled is (dentro) within... and I know how such messages are, such handful of words... like a rosebud unfolding. Like your poem! |
| Posted by JD Clay on 01/11/08 at 03:15 PM I like your attention to detail and how you gently place sublimity in between two fluttering pages and your delicate title inside two soft subtle roses. Great message with a special touch. Cool signature too! |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/11/08 at 04:19 PM A lovely and artistic combination of words and photo. |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 01/11/08 at 05:04 PM Exquisite in every detail, as per your usual. What a rosy complexion! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/12/08 at 02:14 AM Yes indeed, truly sublime Maria. As always an excellent visual and verbal feast for the mind. Is that angelic trumpets I hear off in the distance??? |
| Posted by Alisa Js on 01/12/08 at 09:03 AM gorgeous in every way.. aloha to you from this side of paradise.. alisa ;-) |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 01/13/08 at 02:59 AM So beautiful! I think you should print this on photo paper, mat, and frame it, then hang it somewhere in your home. Better yet, do this with many of your poems and let the world see the beauty that lies within and outside your soul - like maybe show it to your friends at the hospital or school. This is such an important part of you, it can't be separate.
~Chelle~ |
