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sometimes (A rictameter)
by Paganini Jones
sometimes
I need three words.
four are far too many
to revive this faded yearning.
tired attention wanders so easily.
a touch on skin, ever so soft
can feel too invasive
I need three words
sometimes
01/02/2008
Author's Note: This was a challenge poem, the challenge was to write a form poem and to include 4 specific words. Is it obvious which they were?
Posted on 01/02/2008
Copyright © 2026 Paganini Jones
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/02/08 at 04:34 PM So here you have me learning something new in this new year already. Rictameter is a fascinating form - you did it more than justice, and I think I know what the three words are. ;) |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/11/08 at 05:25 PM "Sometimes I love you???" Thought provoking, and not forced in terms of combining message and form. Five gold stars in my book! :o) |
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