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ahead
by Mary Frances Spencerfreeway sign
blinking detour
golden arrow pointing
left
i drive on
cant exit
life
unpredictable
hands gripping
cant see
beyond
the obvious
directive
so flow
breathe in
the unexpected
deer crossing
alternate route
ahead
12/04/2007 Author's Note: Sometimes we have to take a different off-ramp! MFS
Posted on 12/05/2007
Copyright © 2024 Mary Frances Spencer
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 12/05/07 at 08:19 AM "golden arrow" so enlightened... and the "hands gripping" poem centered toward "the unexpected" "deer crossing"s of life... fascinating road map and your little afterthoughts have become a signature! |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 12/05/07 at 09:44 AM But oh how we wonder sometimes, the exit's "what ifs", maybe not even for ourselves, but for all those getting off the main thorough-fare and headed someplace different than our own obvious. |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 12/05/07 at 02:50 PM Excellent! Now, one of my favorites! |
| Posted by David Garner on 12/05/07 at 03:34 PM I took a beautiful drive through your words. Thank you. |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 12/06/07 at 05:32 AM Oh, what a cool idea, to write a poem about being in traffic. This is great. It is mostly an empty experience for me... guess I am not a good Buddhist... but never claimed to be. Thanks, my dear. |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 12/08/07 at 12:57 PM I love how all your words merge onto that great anecdotal highway towards their deeper meaning. |
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