Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Michelle Angelini on 11/27/07 at 10:43 PM Simple and beautiful. Isn't it nice that all of us are sharing the same sky?
~Chelle~
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Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 11/28/07 at 04:04 AM Works for me. |
Posted by Mary Frances Spencer on 11/28/07 at 05:42 AM Sweet! MFS |
Posted by Brian Francis on 11/30/07 at 05:02 PM Very nicely said. Brief but bountiful.
--bf |
Posted by Charles M Harrison on 12/02/07 at 09:22 PM Very nice. Simple and to the point. |
Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 09/27/09 at 07:05 AM at the core of this ode
is a fantastic metaphor
which you hatched to perfection. |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/18/10 at 04:36 PM Loved it. Thank you. Congrats on POTD. |
Posted by Jim Benz on 01/18/10 at 05:48 PM Looking at this, I was immediately inspired to a more cynical "sunlit" response - something to do with a bird and a white stain on my shoulder. I like yours better! Here's to a whole nestful of perpetually hatching moonlit dreams. |