|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Michelle Angelini on 11/27/07 at 10:43 PM|
Simple and beautiful. Isn't it nice that all of us are sharing the same sky?
|Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 11/28/07 at 04:04 AM|
Works for me.
|Posted by Mary Frances Spencer on 11/28/07 at 05:42 AM|
|Posted by Brian Francis on 11/30/07 at 05:02 PM|
Very nicely said. Brief but bountiful.
|Posted by Charles M Harrison on 12/02/07 at 09:22 PM|
Very nice. Simple and to the point.
|Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 09/27/09 at 07:05 AM|
at the core of this ode
is a fantastic metaphor
which you hatched to perfection.
|Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/18/10 at 04:36 PM|
Loved it. Thank you. Congrats on POTD.
|Posted by Jim Benz on 01/18/10 at 05:48 PM|
Looking at this, I was immediately inspired to a more cynical "sunlit" response - something to do with a bird and a white stain on my shoulder. I like yours better! Here's to a whole nestful of perpetually hatching moonlit dreams.