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moonlit night

by Sigurdur Haraldsson

moonlit night folding
its wings over the city
hatching my dreams


Posted on 11/27/2007
Copyright © 2021 Sigurdur Haraldsson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Michelle Angelini on 11/27/07 at 10:43 PM

Simple and beautiful. Isn't it nice that all of us are sharing the same sky?

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 11/28/07 at 04:04 AM

Works for me.

Posted by Mary Frances Spencer on 11/28/07 at 05:42 AM

Sweet! MFS

Posted by Brian Francis on 11/30/07 at 05:02 PM

Very nicely said. Brief but bountiful. --bf

Posted by Charles M Harrison on 12/02/07 at 09:22 PM

Very nice. Simple and to the point.

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 09/27/09 at 07:05 AM

at the core of this ode is a fantastic metaphor which you hatched to perfection.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/18/10 at 04:36 PM

Loved it. Thank you. Congrats on POTD.

Posted by Jim Benz on 01/18/10 at 05:48 PM

Looking at this, I was immediately inspired to a more cynical "sunlit" response - something to do with a bird and a white stain on my shoulder. I like yours better! Here's to a whole nestful of perpetually hatching moonlit dreams.

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