| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Mary Frances Spencer on 11/19/07 at 03:04 AM The redder the better!!! MFS |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 11/19/07 at 09:49 AM beautiful. I love the suggestiveness and boldnes of the decision not to "blot". I love "the day's awaiting flesh". And "kiss full-mouthed". Yes! |
| Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 11/19/07 at 12:51 PM i love the big sweeping colorful boldness of this! |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 11/19/07 at 03:06 PM Your wit sparkles aplenty, WHY NOT have your lips match in the boldest colors? You go girl! |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 11/21/07 at 12:52 AM Fresh analogy of facing the day with full confidence and joy! |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 11/21/07 at 11:34 AM this ode is so wonderfully melodic. it speaks in tones that are metaphorically subtle. |
