|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Mary Frances Spencer on 11/19/07 at 03:04 AM|
The redder the better!!! MFS
|Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 11/19/07 at 09:49 AM|
beautiful. I love the suggestiveness and boldnes of the decision not to "blot". I love "the day's awaiting flesh". And "kiss full-mouthed". Yes!
|Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 11/19/07 at 12:51 PM|
i love the big sweeping colorful boldness of this!
|Posted by A. Paige White on 11/19/07 at 03:06 PM|
Your wit sparkles aplenty, WHY NOT have your lips match in the boldest colors? You go girl!
|Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 11/21/07 at 12:52 AM|
Fresh analogy of facing the day with full confidence and joy!
|Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 11/21/07 at 11:34 AM|
this ode is so wonderfully melodic. it speaks in tones that are metaphorically subtle.