| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 11/06/07 at 08:39 PM i like the last stanza, though i had to read it a couple of times to get my slowly revolving brain to put the thought together correctly. |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 11/06/07 at 08:42 PM Definitely! So many lessons I've chosen to ignore and they boomerang back into my life until I see their worth.
~Chelle~
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| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/07/07 at 03:11 PM OH, do I see myself in this. The first two lines are sooo true and I love the use of shadings and colors. I also love the last stanza - have to laugh at the image and appreciate its simple truth, the obvious. Thanks! |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 11/07/07 at 08:54 PM Ack. It hits home so hard I think I've swallowed a hair ball. This one is biting! Nice! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/10/07 at 03:45 PM Love the analogy, combination of concrete and human spiritualism here. |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 11/12/07 at 08:55 PM Hard-hitting and true to the bone, but that last stanza cracked me up. I appreciate your perspective, Charlie. |
| Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 11/13/07 at 07:03 PM to learn to get a different result you have to change your action is a difficult lesson so many miss but even so obvious to some not always obvious to one...well put especially the last stanza...smh |
Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 11/15/07 at 01:11 AMhow to grip a sheer rock
and hold on for dear life
you are so amazing • and this is proof
peace•hope•love•Jill |
