It Was

by Kate Demeree

It was but a dance…

A dream

A time to remember

When one grew old

It was but a breath…

We breathed

On a warm summer’s night

In dream

It was…

It is…

I will be


It was…


Posted on 09/13/2007
Copyright © 2021 Kate Demeree

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charles E Minshall on 09/13/07 at 06:14 PM

Great poem Katie....Charlie

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 09/16/07 at 10:04 AM

you've not lost your delicate touch Kate. this is indeed a sumptuous affair of words and music and subtle and tender to the point of relaxing all the tense muscles in the brain.

Posted by Paganini Jones on 06/06/09 at 07:51 PM

Mmmm. A mood and emotion beautifully captured. This is exquisite, taut writing.

Posted by Glenn Currier on 07/06/09 at 08:18 PM

Ah, those summer nights and what they do. Thanks for this lovely lift.

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