| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 09/06/07 at 04:44 AM I'd like to see more on this thought. Not that this felt incomplete or anything. It was brutal, good stuff. |
| Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 09/06/07 at 08:47 AM signed on just to comment this.....I am loving every second of it! Great, read it 3 times...going to read again! |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 09/06/07 at 07:05 PM Rogue poet's assessment of conversation I think! But a lovable rogue nontheless. Glad to see you back baiting us all! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/06/07 at 07:46 PM A powerful statement for one way of looking at it Max. I like how this poem takes no prisoners. |
| Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 09/06/07 at 09:55 PM I too just smiled and thought of the rhetoric of poets who find the voice to say what others dare not...you would not be one of those...shout on roque poet let the fulmenating begin...smh |
| Posted by Katerina T Nix on 09/07/07 at 11:52 AM Just excellent! My sentiments exactly! Well done and thanks for sharing this piece. -Kat :) |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 09/07/07 at 02:59 PM A dripping pen, to be sure.... I wait for more. |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 09/07/07 at 04:20 PM Indeed! You nailed it, Max. Excellent poem and commentary. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 09/08/07 at 02:42 AM
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| Posted by Laura Doom on 10/14/07 at 06:41 PM The smile of which nightmares are made - are platitudes really as effective as floss? :) |
| Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 01/21/08 at 01:31 AM a brilliant tongue lashing! mrrwarrow! PK |
