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Blue Arms

by George Hoerner

blue arms direct traffic
converging on the 20th century coliseum
crowds are carried along
on the music of crunching
peanuts, popcorn, and crackerjacks
arm in arm sweater and blouse
twist and turn their way
to sit and cheer

again blue arms direct traffic
receding now to coffee shops
slowly leaves hang still
as the breeze from the crowd
fades and dies as distant music

evening sun and moon vie
for supremacy of the sky
as shadows darken and deepen
arm in arm sweater and blouse
twist and turn their way
to sit and hear
leaves falling sighs sighing

face to face sweater and blouse touch
and held together
shut out space and time
paradise as sweater and blouse
are one with noon and stars

together falling gently as leaves
embracing softly as waves on a beach
carried higher and higher until
floating softly to earth
as the sun gently
breaks across the horizon
arm in arm sweater and blouse
perceive the world anew

blue arms direct traffic
to the parting where
space and time return
to wonder when again
arm in arm sweater and blouse
will twist and turn
to fall as leaves
embraces as waves

08/13/2007

Author's Note: a very early poem

Posted on 08/13/2007
Copyright © 2024 George Hoerner

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Anne Engelen on 08/14/07 at 08:36 AM

...and I love it. It took me on a twist, kinda got me to dance on the rhythm and it painted colourful pictures while I was twirling!

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/23/07 at 04:38 PM

There is a charm to this that begs for a re-read. The use of arms in blue, or sweater with blouse, is delightful. I like not seeing the faces, for some reason. You've given this a different focus using the arms and I like that idea a lot, not on faces and expressions, but on actions taken. The 20th century colliseum is a nice touch - a whole other subject there, I suspect - but I like the segue from crowd to just the two. And the use of leaves falling and waves embracing the beach - you give me sounds and images beyond the couple, well, coupling. Nice ending that leads me to more beginnings.

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 05/29/08 at 12:21 PM

there are qualities to this poem, of which if one where to equate it with falling in love, by Jove, it would be a falling at first sight.

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