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thirsty

by Mary Ellen Smith

the spring blooms are weary

their green shoots fade and wither

as they wait for shade.

june bugs fall

and the august sun burns

their little brown bodies.

sometimes a breeze teases

but it is just a whisper.

summer keeping control

for at least a few weeks more.

 

08/08/2007

Posted on 08/08/2007
Copyright © 2025 Mary Ellen Smith

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 08/09/07 at 11:09 AM

Mary Ellen, your words are such subtle feast on the eyes and a much needed dew on my August brain.

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 08/10/07 at 02:41 PM

Good poem Mar. I dread the approaching winter months.....Charlie

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/10/07 at 07:31 PM

the hard hold is starting to release just a bit here in the West - I love your light touch here with hope nestled inbetween the hot and dry of summer.

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 08/12/07 at 06:34 PM

You've captured poetically the heat of July and August. "Summer is in control" is right! Here at least!

Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 08/15/07 at 11:10 PM

thirsty indeed.. I enjoyed this, very nice.

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